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 ====  RJ01116269 (v2.21) fan translation  ====
-This was made mainly to allow me play the game with ease,
-but some fellow :crab: enjoyer(s) might want try it too.
+This translation originally was for personal use/experience,
+but I figured some fellow :crab: enjoyer(s) might want try it too.
 
-I don't have an editor or proofreader for this work, so expect to find some grammar errors.
-While it might be shabby, I hope I captured the contexts well enough for you to enjoy.
+I don't have an editor or proofreader for this work, so expect to find some grammar errors. While this might be far from perfect, I do hope I captured the contexts well enough for you to enjoy.
 
 Lastly, if you enjoy this game,
 please consider purchasing it to support the developer!
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