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more proofreading (mostly 3rd person narration) See merge request dazed-translations/lust-oni!5
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"Red Oni defeated bonus! You gained \\c[23]10\\c[0] Spirit Energy!"
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"Red Oni defeated! You gained \\c[23]10\\c[0] Spirit Energy!"
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"You have to get out of here before the Red Oni breaks free.\nBut \\N[1]'s eyes are glued to one spot."
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"He has to get out of there before the Red Oni breaks free.\nBut \\N[1]'s eyes are glued to one spot."
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"With every movement she makes, her breasts change shape and\njiggle invitingly, as if luring you in."
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"With every movement she makes, her breasts change shape and\njiggle invitingly, as if luring his in."
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"Touch her",
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"Leave this place"
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"Nervously, you poke the Red Oni's breast with your\nfingertip."
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"Nervously, he pokes the Red Oni's breast with his\nfingertip."
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"It's so soft, you feel like your finger might get swallowed\nup. The sensation instantly captivates you."
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"It's so soft, he feels like his finger might get swallowed\nup. The sensation instantly captivates him."
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"Right in front of you, the Red Oni bares her sharp teeth and\nstruggles to break free from her restraints."
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"Right in front of him, the Red Oni bares her sharp teeth and\nstruggles to break free from her restraints."
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"If you take too long, you might get attacked. If you're\ngoing to leave, now's your only chance."
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"Staying here any longer could be dangerous.\nIf he was to leave, the moment was now."
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"Even though you know that, you can't suppress your arousal.\n\\N[1] sinks even deeper into temptation."
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"Even though he knows that, he can't suppress his arousal.\n\\N[1] sinks even deeper into temptation."
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"This time, you grab her breast with your whole hand. It\nfeels like not just your fingers, but your entire arm is\nsinking into her chest."
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"This time, he grabs her breast with his whole hand. It\nfeels like not just his fingers, but his entire arm is\nsinking into her chest."
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"Your heartbeat quickens and your breathing grows ragged. All\nthe blood in your body rushes to your palm and your lower\nhalf, making it hard to think."
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"His heartbeat quickens and breathing grows ragged. All the\nblood in his body rushes to his palm and his lower\nhalf, making it hard to think."
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"You find yourself wanting to be swallowed up by the Red\nOni's breasts completely. That thought drifts through your\ndazed mind."
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"He finds himself wanting to be swallowed up by the Red\nOni's breasts completely. That thought drifts through his\ndazed mind."
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"Placed a stone in the classroom.\\c[23](\\V[4] left)\\c[0]"
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"Placed a stone in the classroom. \\c[23](\\V[4] left)\\c[0]"
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"Letting Ruri pull me along, I ran down the hallway without\nunderstanding what was going on."
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"Letting Ruri pull him along, he ran down the hallway\nwithout understanding what was going on."
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"I let her know I was fine for now. But more than that, there\nwere a lot of things I wanted to ask."
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"He let her know he was fine for now. But more than that,\nthere were a lot of things he wanted to ask."
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"What Ruri handed me looked like three talismans."
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"What Ruri handed him looked like three talismans."
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"Next, Ruri handed me a stone small enough to fit in my palm."
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"Next, Ruri handed him a stone small enough to fit in his\npalm."
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"The save function is temporarily restricted. You can only\nsave at the \\c[24]magic circle in this classroom\\c[0]. (You can't save\nif the Red Oni has found you.)"
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"The save function is temporarily restricted. You can only\nsave at the \\c[24]magic circle in this classroom\\c[0].\n(You can't save if the Red Oni has found you.)"
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"Looking closer, Ranna's shoulders and legs are trembling\nslightly."
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"Looking closer, Ranna's shoulders and legs were trembling\nslightly."
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"―Honestly, it's almost strange how calm I am right now."
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"―Honestly, it's almost strange how calm he was right now."
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"Placed a stone in the classroom.\\c[23](\\V[4] left)\\c[0]"
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"I quickly grabbed the fire extinguisher sitting in the\ncorner of the room and faced the monster."
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"He quickly grabbed the fire extinguisher sitting in the\ncorner of the room and faced the monster."
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"I figured my only options were to either spray it to blind\nher, or use it as a weapon and fight back."
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"He figured his only options were to either spray it to\nblind her, or use it as a weapon and fight back."
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"The monster stopped moving. Maybe she was being cautious of\nme."
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"The monster stopped moving. Maybe she was being cautious of\nhim."
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"If that's the case, good. I slowly backed away, careful not\nto provoke her."
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"If that's the case, good. He slowly backed away, careful not\nto provoke her."
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"This is it for me――\\! Or so I thought."
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"It was all over!\\! Or so he thought."
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"――I couldn't comprehend what just happened."
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"Should I try coming out from under the bed...?"
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"Ruri (She broke the chains with brute force...? Even after I\nweakened her just to be safe...)"
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