From d93e269a70f30384affff50ba9deaa7be9fbb97c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: onms Date: Wed, 29 Oct 2025 01:23:23 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] fixed some bad sentences --- www/data/CommonEvents.json | 8 ++++---- www/data/Map005.json | 2 +- www/data/Map035.json | 4 ++-- www/data/Map036.json | 2 +- www/data/Map037.json | 10 +++++----- www/data/Map053.json | 4 ++-- www/data/Map054.json | 4 ++-- www/data/Map083.json | 2 +- www/data/Map090.json | 8 ++++---- www/data/Map091.json | 2 +- 10 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-) diff --git a/www/data/CommonEvents.json b/www/data/CommonEvents.json index bf3ca6b..fe08fb4 100644 --- a/www/data/CommonEvents.json +++ b/www/data/CommonEvents.json @@ -44623,7 +44623,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "He could feel the hopeless pleasure eating away at \\N[1]'s\nbrain like poison." + "\\N[1] could feel the hopeless pleasure eating away his\nbrain like poison." ] }, { @@ -46652,7 +46652,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "And then dropped her crotch right onto his face." + "And then dropped her crotch right onto his mouth." ] }, { @@ -66297,7 +66297,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "Ahaha♥ It's in...♥ You just had sex with your friend's\ngirlfriend, \\N[1]♥" + "Ahaha♥ It's in...♥ You're having sex with your\nfriend's girlfriend, \\N[1]♥" ] }, { @@ -205007,7 +205007,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "The sensation in his fingertips linked directly to his cock." + "The sensations in his fingers were linked directly to\nhis cock." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map005.json b/www/data/Map005.json index 754352e..4ff67bf 100644 --- a/www/data/Map005.json +++ b/www/data/Map005.json @@ -10552,7 +10552,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\N[1] told them, without going into details, that he'd be\nstaying out for a while." + "\\N[1] told him, without going into details, that he'd be\nstaying out for a while." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map035.json b/www/data/Map035.json index 645d555..02003e2 100644 --- a/www/data/Map035.json +++ b/www/data/Map035.json @@ -2372,7 +2372,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "Even so, we Shrine Maidens have kept up our training. As a\ndeterrent, in case the Colorlust Onis ever reappear." + "Even so, we Shrine Maidens have kept up our training.\nAs a precaution, in case the Colorlust Onis ever\nreappear." ] }, { @@ -3376,7 +3376,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "The Colorlust Onis really do appear out of nowhere. I want\nus to stick together as much as possible." + "The Colorlust Onis really do appear out of nowhere.\nI want us to stick together as much as possible." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map036.json b/www/data/Map036.json index 50025b2..3037144 100644 --- a/www/data/Map036.json +++ b/www/data/Map036.json @@ -4638,7 +4638,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "The school's a mess, but... I'm glad. \\c[18]Everyone made it out\nokay\\c[0]." + "The school's a mess, but... I'm glad.\n\\c[18]Everyone made it out okay\\c[0]." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map037.json b/www/data/Map037.json index 84f7e9a..8b33794 100644 --- a/www/data/Map037.json +++ b/www/data/Map037.json @@ -1447,7 +1447,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "Sorry it's a bit cramped. Please make yourself at home and\nrelax as if it's your own room." + "Sorry, it's a bit cramped. Please make yourself\nat home and relax as if it's your own room." ] }, { @@ -1471,7 +1471,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "If you need anything, just ask either Ruri or me. Well\nthen..." + "If you need anything, just ask either Ruri or me.\nWell then..." ] }, { @@ -1907,7 +1907,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "...Huh. Wait, did my mom not tell you anything?" + "...Huh? Wait, did my mom not tell you anything?" ] }, { @@ -4056,7 +4056,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "That just made it feel even more like she was mocking me,\nwhich only turned \\N[1] on more." + "That just made it feel even more like she was mocking him,\nwhich only turned \\N[1] on more." ] }, { @@ -4293,7 +4293,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "She whispered that in my ear, her body heat pressed against\nmy back, and \\N[1] reached his limit." + "She whispered that in his ear, her body heat pressed against\nhis back, and \\N[1] reached his limit." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map053.json b/www/data/Map053.json index bbbd342..bab8914 100644 --- a/www/data/Map053.json +++ b/www/data/Map053.json @@ -11053,7 +11053,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\c[27]\"Makes women in their domain go into heat and controls\nthem\"\\c[0]... That's \\c[9]Blue Oni\\c[0]'s power." + "\\c[27]\"It makes women in its domain go into heat\nand controls them\"\\c[0]... That's \\c[9]Blue Oni\\c[0]'s power." ] }, { @@ -11969,7 +11969,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "...Good grief. While a certain someone is off having their\n\"fun,\" things have gotten out of hand here." + "...Good grief. While a certain someone was off having their\n\"fun,\" things have gotten out of hand here." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map054.json b/www/data/Map054.json index 04e9d44..478291e 100644 --- a/www/data/Map054.json +++ b/www/data/Map054.json @@ -30486,7 +30486,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 2, "parameters": [ - "The sensation in his fingertips is linked directly to his\ncock." + "The sensations in his fingers were linked directly to\nhis cock." ] }, { @@ -32843,7 +32843,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "The sensation in his fingers was linked directly to his\ncock." + "The sensations in his fingers were linked directly to\nhis cock." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map083.json b/www/data/Map083.json index 1dfc626..0e08812 100644 --- a/www/data/Map083.json +++ b/www/data/Map083.json @@ -4126,7 +4126,7 @@ "parameters": [ [ "Why are you here!?", - "(Blushing, she turns her face away)" + "(Blushing, he turns his face away)" ], -1, 0, diff --git a/www/data/Map090.json b/www/data/Map090.json index 3e48ea8..40f9532 100644 --- a/www/data/Map090.json +++ b/www/data/Map090.json @@ -11362,7 +11362,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "But I think it's very likely that the Colorlust Oni has\nsnuck into this mansion." + "But I think it's very likely that a Colorlust Oni has\nsnuck into this mansion." ] }, { @@ -11386,7 +11386,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "The Colorlust Oni sometimes kills women who get in the way\nand can't be used as 'food.' She doesn't always just go\nafter men." + "The Colorlust Onis sometimes kill women who get in the way\nand can't be used as 'food.' They don't always just go\nafter men." ] }, { @@ -11410,7 +11410,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "...If the Colorlust Oni really has gotten in, waiting to act\nwould be a bad move." + "...If a Colorlust Oni really has gotten in, waiting to act\nwould be a bad move." ] }, { @@ -11504,7 +11504,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "I'll protect everyone. Whether it's a human or the Colorlust\nOni, only you and I can fight." + "I'll protect everyone. Whether it's a human or a Colorlust\nOni, only you and I can fight." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map091.json b/www/data/Map091.json index ce79ed3..671969c 100644 --- a/www/data/Map091.json +++ b/www/data/Map091.json @@ -9735,7 +9735,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "Too slow. The Nureba Shrine Maiden has really fallen." + "Too slow. The Nureba Shrine Maidens have really fallen." ] }, {