From 8fa4bc13a27863ac9e7b83df23ea35dbcd89a658 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Demon_Seed Date: Thu, 28 Dec 2023 02:41:45 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Serena and Marilou scene/Erika's First scene Fixes --- www/data/Map006.json | 8 ++++---- www/data/Map054.json | 4 ++-- www/data/Map057.json | 4 ++-- www/data/Map126.json | 6 +++--- 4 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/www/data/Map006.json b/www/data/Map006.json index 4e2f2c8..7d092e4 100644 --- a/www/data/Map006.json +++ b/www/data/Map006.json @@ -13127,7 +13127,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 2, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Marilou >Ah, d-dasu no!? Mata!?" + "\\n< Marilou >Ah, did it do it, again!?" ] }, { @@ -24118,7 +24118,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 2, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Serena >A baby... a baby can be...? Between me and... the\nGoblin...?" + "\\n< Serena >Child... a child, can be born...? Between me and the goblin...?" ] }, { @@ -24189,7 +24189,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 2, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Serena >But... I love you, I really do, but... there's...\nnothing... between us...!?" + "\\n< Serena >But... even though there's no love between us?" ] }, { @@ -25998,7 +25998,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 2, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Serena >Child... is this really enough...?" + "\\n< Serena >Making a child... is this really enough?>" ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map054.json b/www/data/Map054.json index ded0875..542425d 100644 --- a/www/data/Map054.json +++ b/www/data/Map054.json @@ -278109,7 +278109,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Citizen >F... My condolences." + "\\n< Citizen >...My condolences." ] }, { @@ -278133,7 +278133,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 1, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Citizen >That thing inside your belly... it's a shackle.\nIt's proof that you've become a slave to men." + "\\n< Citizen >The thing inside your belly... it's a shackle.\nIt's proof that you've become a slave to men." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map057.json b/www/data/Map057.json index 117e545..3159558 100644 --- a/www/data/Map057.json +++ b/www/data/Map057.json @@ -53952,7 +53952,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Serena >It's Flat-Bread." + "\\n< Serena >It's Flat-Bread pizza." ] }, { @@ -54007,7 +54007,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Serena >I'm tempted to say a word or two about the toppings on\nthis pizza, but I'll bite my tongue since it\nmight be taken the wrong way." + "\\n< Serena >I'm tempted to say a word or two about the toppings on\nit, but I'll bite my tongue since it might\nbe taken the wrong way." ] }, { diff --git a/www/data/Map126.json b/www/data/Map126.json index 868f4db..dee62ab 100644 --- a/www/data/Map126.json +++ b/www/data/Map126.json @@ -5275,7 +5275,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Thief >If it' a man, he'll become a fucking shitty thief.\nIf it's a woman, she'll grow into a good meat\ntoilet, right?!" + "\\n< Thief >If it's a man, he'll become a fucking shitty thief.\nIf it's a woman, she'll grow into a good meat\ntoilet, right?!" ] }, { @@ -9795,7 +9795,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Thief >Every time Iyou see the face of your brat, I want\nyou to remember who the father is...!" + "\\n< Thief >Every time you see the face of your brat, I want\nyou to remember who the father is...!" ] }, { @@ -9850,7 +9850,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "\\n< Thief >How did I impregnate you?! You can remember it\nanytime!" + "\\n< Thief >You can remember how I impregnated you, anytime!" ] }, {