From 92ba52a898bcf86096c2ec23c523bc5edbdeb810 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: onms Date: Fri, 24 Jan 2025 19:09:26 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] creepy to gross, Sakura Gozen TL note, Edaki to Edakiri, Onmyoji to Oniwaban, word wraps --- data/CommonEvents.json | 2 +- data/Items.json | 4 +- data/Map023.json | 2 +- data/Map040.json | 2 +- data/Map089.json | 2 +- data/Troops.json | 2 +- glossary/GlossaryArmorText.dat | 2 + glossary/GlossarySPText.dat | 72 ++++++++++++++++++---------------- glossary/GlossaryWordText.dat | 10 ++--- 9 files changed, 53 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/CommonEvents.json b/data/CommonEvents.json index 42d0084..38fed2f 100644 --- a/data/CommonEvents.json +++ b/data/CommonEvents.json @@ -55866,7 +55866,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 2, "parameters": [ - "I didn't expect eloping to be this nerve-\nwracking... I'm getting fired up... ...Huh? Oh, I\nwas talking about the escape plan. Don't worry\nabout it." + "I didn't expect eloping to be this nerve-wracking...\nI'm getting fired up... ...Huh? Oh, I was talking\nabout the escape plan. Don't worry about it." ] }, { diff --git a/data/Items.json b/data/Items.json index e999c5b..9ac6090 100644 --- a/data/Items.json +++ b/data/Items.json @@ -6284,7 +6284,7 @@ "hitType": 0, "iconIndex": 255, "itypeId": 3, - "name": "Creepy", + "name": "Gross", "note": "\n\n", "occasion": 3, "price": 0, @@ -7116,7 +7116,7 @@ "hitType": 0, "iconIndex": 255, "itypeId": 3, - "name": "Onmyoji", + "name": "Oniwaban", "note": "\n", "occasion": 3, "price": 0, diff --git a/data/Map023.json b/data/Map023.json index e94b8ff..14ccc6c 100644 --- a/data/Map023.json +++ b/data/Map023.json @@ -3741,7 +3741,7 @@ "クエスト詳細変更", { "VariableId": "223", - "DetailNote": "\"[Objective Update] Let's investigate Beast Mountain (Final Act) again.\\n--------------------It's me. I want to investigate the scent that seems to have\\ncaused you to lose your sanity, so I plan to re-examine the ingredients. I want\\nto discuss the details, so please come to the \\\\c[2]Hot Spring\\\\c[0] once.\"", + "DetailNote": "\"[Objective Update] Let's investigate Beast Mountain (Final Act) again.\\n--------------------It's me. I want to investigate the scent that seems to have\\ncaused you to lose your sanity, so I plan to re-examine the ingredients. I want\\nto discuss the details, so please come to the \\\\c[2]Hot Spring\\\\c[0] at once.\"", "Detail": "" } ] diff --git a/data/Map040.json b/data/Map040.json index df70bb5..ff8f503 100644 --- a/data/Map040.json +++ b/data/Map040.json @@ -11674,7 +11674,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "...Don't you remember being tied up by my\nmother? Youkai are often used for sexual purposes,\nbut some were also employed by onmyoji?" + "...Don't you remember being tied up by my mother?\nYoukai are often used for sexual purposes, but\nsome were also employed by the Oniwaban onmyoji." ] }, { diff --git a/data/Map089.json b/data/Map089.json index b5e2b10..ccb14e8 100644 --- a/data/Map089.json +++ b/data/Map089.json @@ -9784,7 +9784,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "Gero gero... That's not good, ribbit... You're\nlacking keroronic acid and keroprotein, ribbit.\n...If you'd like, I can invite you to our private\npool, ribbit. It's a secret space we had the leech\nclan help us create, ribbit." + "Gero gero... That's not good, ribbit... You're lacking\nkeroronic acid and keroprotein, ribbit... If you'd like,\nI can invite you to our private pool, ribbit. It's a\nsecret space we had the Leech Clan help us create, ribbit." ] }, { diff --git a/data/Troops.json b/data/Troops.json index a829e9a..eb1585a 100644 --- a/data/Troops.json +++ b/data/Troops.json @@ -5058,7 +5058,7 @@ "code": 401, "indent": 0, "parameters": [ - "Guh... This old man...! What incredible strength...!! ...Is\nhe really an old man...!?" + "Guh... This old man...! What incredible strength...!!\n...Is he really an old man...!?" ] }, { diff --git a/glossary/GlossaryArmorText.dat b/glossary/GlossaryArmorText.dat index 6d6a98f..5c8895e 100644 --- a/glossary/GlossaryArmorText.dat +++ b/glossary/GlossaryArmorText.dat @@ -430,6 +430,8 @@ Represents the essence manifested by a power beyond human knowledge. Erotic power is the power of essence, essentially the seed of life. The scattered seed will absorb enough essence and surely come to recognize itself someday. + +Also known as the Black Desire Orb. @end // accessory 32 Body Charm diff --git a/glossary/GlossarySPText.dat b/glossary/GlossarySPText.dat index c702558..fb3ee29 100644 --- a/glossary/GlossarySPText.dat +++ b/glossary/GlossarySPText.dat @@ -278,22 +278,22 @@ with the same meaning. @start 355 \ac\{【Binding】\} -A type of demon magic used by specters. -It is said that in ancient times, specters who were used by onmyoji -were told of this method. +A type of demon magic used by youkai. +It is said that in ancient times, youkai who +were used by onmyoji were told of this method. -Since binding requires the consent of the other party, -sensible ones hardly ever fall for it. +Since binding requires the consent of the other +party, sensible ones hardly ever fall for it. @end @start 356 -\ac\{【Three Great Youkai\} +\ac\{【Three Great Youkai】\} -The three great Youkai of Sakuraba are said to be the most -powerful and lustful of all youkai. +The three great Youkai of Sakuraba are said to be +the most powerful and lustful of all youkai. -Some are just widespread rumors, -(facts aside) they are feared and admired by some specters. +Some are just widespread rumors (facts aside), +but they are feared and admired by most youkai. @end @start 357 @@ -375,11 +375,15 @@ take the lead. @end @start 364 -\ac\{【Sakura Gozen】\} +\ac\{【Sakura Gozen - Lady Sakura】\} -The front of the large cherry tree growing in the center of the castle. -It has existed since before Onma Tadakatsu became a daimyo, -and has remained unchanged throughout the ages. +The front of the large cherry tree growing in +the center of the castle. It has existed since +before Onma Tadakatsu became a daimyo, and has +remained unchanged throughout the ages. + +Gozen translates to Young Lady, but is also +a title occasionally given to female samurai. @end @@ -436,18 +440,20 @@ her face, physique, and martial strength. @start 377 \ac\{【Tachibana Family】\} -A rare samurai family recognized in Sakuraba, where martial strength -is valued. +A rare samurai family recognized in Sakuraba, where martial +strength is valued. -Tokuro became the head and gained trust through his sincerity and -strength, even progressing in marriage talks with the Edaki family, but a major incident caused him to lose the family name in disgrace. +Tokuro became the head and gained trust through his sincerity and +strength, even progressing in marriage talks with the Edakiri family, +but a major incident caused him to lose the family name in disgrace. Although details are unknown, he's rumored to have committed an -unforgivable error as a samurai, resulting in his work as a bouncer at a brothel. +unforgivable error as a samurai, resulting in his work as a bouncer +at a brothel. Now, he is mocked as the Fool of the West and ridiculed as a urine -collector, though relatively mild, he often receives consultations from -male townspeople. +collecting creep. Though relatively mild, he often receives +consultations from male townspeople. @end @start 378 @@ -616,7 +622,7 @@ body expansion followed mainly by death. @end @start 388001 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: The Great Match of That Day】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: The Great Match of That Day】\} ... The blunder at the match remains deeply regrettable. @@ -638,7 +644,7 @@ the escaped demon doesn't seem likely to return... @end @start 388002 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: The Great Match of That Day】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: The Great Match of That Day】\} ... Who would benefit from showing Sakura-sama the blacksmith's corpse? In the end, the match was interrupted, but was that @@ -659,7 +665,7 @@ We should direct Hasami to explore that angle in the investigation. @end @start 388003 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: The Great Match of That Day】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: The Great Match of That Day】\} ……… @@ -671,7 +677,7 @@ I need to study the concoctions of the shadow physician's medicines. @end @start 388004 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} After the match, Sakura-sama was agitated, but it was my duty to soothe them. @@ -687,7 +693,7 @@ I must organize the information. @end @start 388005 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} ... According to the lord, humans, beasts, and even demons were driven insane by a widespread disease called "Mononoke," leading @@ -705,7 +711,7 @@ a potential reemergence of Mononoke. @end @start 388006 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} ... Unlike the past, the number of demons has decreased, leaving behind creatures ravaged by licentious instincts... @@ -723,7 +729,7 @@ physically close until they are at ease... @end @start 388007 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Strong Sakuraba Once Again】\} ... However, are Sakuraba samurais interested in human women? @@ -738,7 +744,7 @@ Should we entertain the idea of a breeding stallion...? @end @start 389001 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: The Lord's Passing】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: The Lord's Passing】\} ... The lord has passed away. Despite repeated poisonings and constant threats to life, @@ -761,7 +767,7 @@ make Sakuraba stronger. @end @start 389002 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Osore Pass Great Subjugation】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Osore Pass Great Subjugation】\} ... Sakura-sama's first deployment was to capture a "Mononoke" of Osore Pass territory. @@ -780,7 +786,7 @@ such a grave form... @end @start 389003 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Osore Pass Great Subjugation】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Osore Pass Great Subjugation】\} ... Ideally, capturing them alive for research purposes was expected... but despite that, there was nothing to be done @@ -798,7 +804,7 @@ to live as part of the monster's flesh was too grim a fate... @end @start 389004 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Osore Pass Great Subjugation】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Osore Pass Great Subjugation】\} ... Despite Lord Onsen's death, the townspeople seem undisturbed, probably because that fool is taking his place. @@ -813,7 +819,7 @@ We must proceed with careful research... @end @start 389005 -\ac\{【Harara Edaki Records: Epidemic】\} +\ac\{【Harara Edakiri Records: Epidemic】\} ... Shortly after returning from the pass, one of the Three Great Demons, Hana no Hiru, attacked to steal the corpses diff --git a/glossary/GlossaryWordText.dat b/glossary/GlossaryWordText.dat index 30df85e..a75b253 100644 --- a/glossary/GlossaryWordText.dat +++ b/glossary/GlossaryWordText.dat @@ -109,10 +109,10 @@ Refers to mental scars. Originally rumored to be from Greek. @end @start 219 -\ac\{【creepy】\} +\ac\{【gross】\} -Refers to something disgusting. Refers to samurai who collect -urine. +Refers to something disgusting, like +a samurai who collects urine. Creepy. @end @start 220 @@ -301,8 +301,8 @@ A difficult kanji. \ac\{【oniwaban】\} Refers to the spies of Sakuraba. -They primarily serve the shogunate, led by Edakiri, -and the previous head has retired. +They primarily serve the shogunate, led by +Edakiri, and the previous head has retired. @end @start 252