From 8b9ad2152db9febaf90ce69203de65432fb1fd81 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: dazedanon <dazedanon@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 18 Dec 2025 15:26:49 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Fix desc best I can

---
 data/Map012.json | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/data/Map012.json b/data/Map012.json
index 07fef0d..6f570bc 100644
--- a/data/Map012.json
+++ b/data/Map012.json
@@ -12305,7 +12305,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "Atra was born in \\V[581] and possessed \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known as \\v[329] and \\v[330], but she also\nhad another side known as \\v[331]."
+                                "Atra's origin was \\V[581], and she possessed \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known for being \\v[329] and \\v[330], but\nshe also had another side—\\v[331]."
                             ]
                         },
                         {
@@ -12650,7 +12650,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "Born in \\V[581], Atra possessed an exceptional \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known as \\v[329] and \\v[330], but she also\nhad another side known as \\v[331]."
+                                "As \\V[581], Atra possessed exceptional \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known for being \\v[329] and \\v[330], but\nshe also had another side—\\v[331]."
                             ]
                         },
                         {
@@ -12994,7 +12994,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "All that remained for war-torn Atra of \\V[581] was her \\V[328].\nSome pitied her as \\v[329] or \\v[330], but she kept her side as\n\\v[331] hidden to the end."
+                                "All that remained for war-torn Atra, \\V[581], was her \\V[328].\nSome pitied her for being \\v[329] or \\v[330], but she kept her\nside as \\v[331] hidden to the end."
                             ]
                         },
                         {
@@ -13338,7 +13338,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "The reason Atra survived \\V[581] was her \\V[328] ability. While\nthe slave traders mocked and humiliated her as \\v[329], \\v[330],\nor even \\v[331], she kept her eyes fixed on her chance for\nrevenge."
+                                "The reason Atra, \\V[581], survived was her \\V[328]. While the\nslave traders mocked her for being \\v[329], \\v[330], or even\n\\v[331], she kept her eyes fixed on her chance for revenge."
                             ]
                         },
                         {
@@ -13682,7 +13682,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "Atra of \\V[581] was a lady of distinguished \\V[328] lineage.\nSome maids frowned at her sides as \\v[329], \\v[330], or \\v[331],\nthinking them unbecoming of a noble lady."
+                                "Atra, \\V[581], was a lady of distinguished \\V[328] lineage.\nSome maids frowned at her being \\v[329], \\v[330], or \\v[331],\nthinking such traits unbecoming of a noble lady."
                             ]
                         },
                         {
@@ -14026,7 +14026,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "Atra of \\V[581] showed her natural \\V[328] talent in business.\nHer sides as \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] only added to her\ncharm, and her business flourished."
+                                "Atra, \\V[581], showed her natural \\V[328] in business.\nHer reputation for being \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] only\nadded to her charm, and her business flourished."
                             ]
                         },
                         {
@@ -14368,7 +14368,7 @@
                             "code": 401,
                             "indent": 1,
                             "parameters": [
-                                "Born in an unknown \\V[581], Atra was extremely \\V[328]. Her\nsides as \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] were popular with the men\nof the night, and she was doted on greatly."
+                                "Atra, \\V[581], was known for her \\V[328]. Her reputation for\nbeing \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] made her popular with the\nmen of the night, and she was doted on greatly."
                             ]
                         },
                         {