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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"Atra was born in \\V[581] and possessed \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known as \\v[329] and \\v[330], but she also\nhad another side known as \\v[331]."
"Atra's origin was \\V[581], and she possessed \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known for being \\v[329] and \\v[330], but\nshe also had another side—\\v[331]."
]
},
{
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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"Born in \\V[581], Atra possessed an exceptional \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known as \\v[329] and \\v[330], but she also\nhad another side known as \\v[331]."
"As \\V[581], Atra possessed exceptional \\V[328]. To the\nvillagers, she was known for being \\v[329] and \\v[330], but\nshe also had another side—\\v[331]."
]
},
{
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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"All that remained for war-torn Atra of \\V[581] was her \\V[328].\nSome pitied her as \\v[329] or \\v[330], but she kept her side as\n\\v[331] hidden to the end."
"All that remained for war-torn Atra, \\V[581], was her \\V[328].\nSome pitied her for being \\v[329] or \\v[330], but she kept her\nside as \\v[331] hidden to the end."
]
},
{
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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"The reason Atra survived \\V[581] was her \\V[328] ability. While\nthe slave traders mocked and humiliated her as \\v[329], \\v[330],\nor even \\v[331], she kept her eyes fixed on her chance for\nrevenge."
"The reason Atra, \\V[581], survived was her \\V[328]. While the\nslave traders mocked her for being \\v[329], \\v[330], or even\n\\v[331], she kept her eyes fixed on her chance for revenge."
]
},
{
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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"Atra of \\V[581] was a lady of distinguished \\V[328] lineage.\nSome maids frowned at her sides as \\v[329], \\v[330], or \\v[331],\nthinking them unbecoming of a noble lady."
"Atra, \\V[581], was a lady of distinguished \\V[328] lineage.\nSome maids frowned at her being \\v[329], \\v[330], or \\v[331],\nthinking such traits unbecoming of a noble lady."
]
},
{
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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"Atra of \\V[581] showed her natural \\V[328] talent in business.\nHer sides as \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] only added to her\ncharm, and her business flourished."
"Atra, \\V[581], showed her natural \\V[328] in business.\nHer reputation for being \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] only\nadded to her charm, and her business flourished."
]
},
{
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"code": 401,
"indent": 1,
"parameters": [
"Born in an unknown \\V[581], Atra was extremely \\V[328]. Her\nsides as \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] were popular with the men\nof the night, and she was doted on greatly."
"Atra, \\V[581], was known for her \\V[328]. Her reputation for\nbeing \\v[329], \\v[330], and \\v[331] made her popular with the\nmen of the night, and she was doted on greatly."
]
},
{